Good speed and vocal qualities,but you have to get louder—diversify your arguments, make sure you have offense included early, make them defend the whole disad (you do this a bit more towards the end admittedly)—change “she did not really explain them” to “there is no warrant”—then go on to expound on what your warrants are, why they are good, why your cards are great etc, great job looking at the specifics of the evidnce
Maddy—rebuttal redos—7/29
Their first argument is…--use some jargon, you are talking about uniqueness at the beginning, its okay to say that—remove the repetition, especially in this speech—don’t spend more time on the metaphor—follow the claim warrant impact model
Disad Drills--7/28 (Baxter)
Good speed and vocal qualities,but you have to get louder—diversify your arguments, make sure you have offense included early, make them defend the whole disad (you do this a bit more towards the end admittedly)—change “she did not really explain them” to “there is no warrant”—then go on to expound on what your warrants are, why they are good, why your cards are great etc, great job looking at the specifics of the evidnce
Maddy—rebuttal redos—7/29
Their first argument is…--use some jargon, you are talking about uniqueness at the beginning, its okay to say that—remove the repetition, especially in this speech—don’t spend more time on the metaphor—follow the claim warrant impact model